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we can't stop, no we can't stop lambs wool eye blind into autumn's wood and down by the river down by the river tonight effigy on the harrow what did he do to earn such a face? boneless heap, raw head kudzu carry me carry me down by the river tonight, tonight down by the river tonight she slipped between fingers and floated away blood in the water thrashing, thrashing there, blood in the water down by the river tonight chronic town headache hollow tree, we lived coughing in the halloween tree throw back the wool in blind eyes, your eyes down by the river tonight...

This makes for a great lyric, Michael – full of enigmatic suggestion and insinuation. Get out the guitar!
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I was dabbling a bit yesterday with my DAW, which might explain the lyrical feel to anything written yesterday. Unfortunately, I was fixated on a riff that I keep revisiting and never quite end up liking the result when I layer other instruments.
I should look less backwards and more forward, as I did with the poetry as I explored a rejiggered version of what I explored about a month ago that didn’t work in practice, but showed promise in my noggin.
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I know that feeling regarding music. My excuse for not really developing ideas is down to laziness though!
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Can’t argue with that…
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Musical, haunting and beautiful.
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Thanks!
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