©2023 michael raven
no finger no moon nothing pointing anywhere or nowhere just a bit of silver tossed to the waters of the wishing well under a cherry moon i miss that tart fruit of you in my mouth but it has gone mayfly in the aching of june living on prayers and mercuric memories i wonder what you think if you think of me and is it often or not at all? patterns skin scratched and india ink promises whiskey, leather on my tongue
For me this reflects how we try to grasp onto something exterior as either guidance or explanation for our past and future lives – yet, in the end, we only have ourselves.
An effective and affecting piece, Michael.
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Thank you!
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This is a keeper. Amazing. (Not that the others are not as well!😉)
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Thank you, Richard. 🙂
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I love the inner and outer of this one. Memory flashes and the thoughts inside. Nicely done.
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Thank you, Tara. ❤
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This one is so beautiful and evocative. Love “cherry moon”, “mercuric memories” and “india ink promises”
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Thanks!
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