©2023 michael raven
you were a comet once
i can see it in your eyes
but someone broke your burn
replaced desire with pain
you'd never think this was
written with you in mind
but i wish you'd show
your comet at least
one last
time...
comet
words | spirit
sceadugenga 
Well this made me weep, Michael… I think we all likely know a broken comet. I would move heaven and earth to help mine find her burn again…🙏💕
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I’ve met more than my fair share over the years. It’s always a sad affair and we’re usually helpless to do anything about it other than to just care.
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💕🙏
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This got me teary too. It might be one of my favorites of yours.
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Oh… I never intended t–
thanks!
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