come dawn michael raven micropoetry April 8, 2023 1 Minute ©2023 michael raven bone womanlaughing stonestanding tallin her sacred waycan you loveall dust just so? Like this:Like Loading... Related Taggedmicropoetry Published April 8, 2023
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I adore those last two lines.
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I tried several variants but kept going back to those two as posted. Something seemed better written that way to me.