come dawn

michael raven micropoetry April 8, 2023 1 Minute

bone woman
laughing stone
standing tall
in her sacred way

can you love
all dust just so?

Published April 8, 2023

2 thoughts on “come dawn”

Bridgette says:

April 10, 2023 at 5:55 pm

I adore those last two lines.

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1. michael raven says:
  
  April 10, 2023 at 9:43 pm
  
  I tried several variants but kept going back to those two as posted. Something seemed better written that way to me.
  
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