following reindeer
across stone & scrub
past midnight trance
beyond the rainbow bridge
old antlers cast aside
rattle these bones
shiver inside
so many
hours
in
.
the long dark
breaking dawn
I’m glad it struck a chord with you and a few others. “Happy little accidents”, to quote a famous painter. I feel it is one of the better of these experiments.
Great piece, great line structure, looking like an exclamation point!
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Thanks, Ray 🤘
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Oohhh this one is one of my favorite three runes poems.
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I’m glad it struck a chord with you and a few others. “Happy little accidents”, to quote a famous painter. I feel it is one of the better of these experiments.
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