©2023 michael raven
i ache to have someone pull me kicking, shrieking out of my rice paper box make my mind stutter shudder, and drift away like gunsmoke on the high desert plains one question to make my brain burn charred to cinder until there is nothing left upstairs a string of words that mindfucks me, leaves me wasted, exhausted drawn into thoughts i have not considered before
Excellent poem!
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Thanks, Michele. 🙏
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👍🏻
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Isn’t it wonderful when this happens? I had this experience recently during a writing class and I’m still reeling from the discussion and questioning why I do this crazy thing.
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I love it when it happens as a reader or as a writer. Or over coffee. I love it when something unexpected is learned that makes you pause and say, “fffuuuuu….”
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For sure!
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