fabulism

michael raven micropoetry January 25, 2023January 25, 2023 1 Minute

if i withdraw
far enough can
someone promise
i will wake in
a pine forest
on a snowy night
trapped in a single
streetlamp's
glow?

Published January 25, 2023January 25, 2023

10 thoughts on “fabulism”

Krista Marson says:

January 25, 2023 at 9:25 pm

That light better be warm!

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1. michael raven says:
  
  January 25, 2023 at 9:41 pm
  
  Minnesotan. Balmy night under the glow of the light.
  
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jsimpsonpoet says:

January 25, 2023 at 9:45 pm

🧡

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chrisnelson61 says:

January 26, 2023 at 4:26 am

Sadly not (pessimistic view).
There’s always the possibility (optimistic)
I’ll leave it to you.
Great sentiment.

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1. michael raven says:
  
  January 26, 2023 at 7:00 am
  
  Thanks, Chris. Sounds like someone might need to force the issue.
  
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  1. chrisnelson61 says:
    
    January 26, 2023 at 10:40 am
    
    🙂
    
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d.a.simpsonwriter says:

January 26, 2023 at 1:17 pm

What a wonderful idea ✨💫

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Bridgette says:

January 30, 2023 at 3:43 pm

Narnia! Yes, please.

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1. michael raven says:
  
  January 30, 2023 at 4:02 pm
  
  There are days I might spend all day at the back of a wardrobe if I had one, looking for hidden doors…
  
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  1. Bridgette says:
    
    January 30, 2023 at 4:03 pm
    
    Same.
    
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