dreaming rocky woodbine

michael raven darkwoods, poems July 21, 2022July 21, 2022 1 Minute

©2022 Michael Raven

i could dream all day

wind tussled tresses
wrap around
my craggy aged face
waterfall mist humid standing
old bear teeth cutting
grey granite toward big skies
i smell slick stone
ancient pine green

rustbrown needles
carpet trails
edged mountain prairie
there, in the shadow
i see...

Published July 21, 2022July 21, 2022

4 thoughts on “dreaming rocky woodbine”

ben Alexander says:

July 21, 2022 at 8:49 am

I leave how you leave this at the end with that ellipsis… Most excellent writing.

Sincerely,
David

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1. Michael Raven says:
  
  July 21, 2022 at 8:56 am
  
  Many thanks, David.
  
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Bridgette says:

July 21, 2022 at 9:56 am

Seriously beautiful.

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1. Michael Raven says:
  
  July 21, 2022 at 12:29 pm
  
  Why, thank you Bridgette. I’m glad you liked it.
  
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