tumble.play

michael raven poems May 16, 2022 1 Minute

black \ wing | fur / silver
moonlit.snow.tumble.roll
feasting scarletbright
with singing mouths
&
w i d e  e y e s  w h i t e
watch.so.silent.above

Published May 16, 2022

6 thoughts on “tumble.play”

tara caribou says:

May 16, 2022 at 10:40 pm

I love everything about this!!

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1. Michael Raven says:
  
  May 17, 2022 at 6:06 am
  
  Thank you so very much. I’m glad to see it struck someone in that way.
  
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  1. tara caribou says:
    
    May 17, 2022 at 5:24 pm
    
    Had to read it through a few time, I love it so much 🥰
    
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    1. Michael Raven says:
      
      May 17, 2022 at 5:25 pm
      
      Thank you, again 🥰
      
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chrisnelson61 says:

May 17, 2022 at 1:42 am

Interesting structure, Michael. It encourages re-reading, which in turn adds more meaning.

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1. Michael Raven says:
  
  May 17, 2022 at 6:09 am
  
  I’m glad it “worked” for you. Thanks!
  
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