crumbs/

silently sitting
are all rooms so empty?
a whiff of perfume from
an empty hallway --
whispers, faint laughter

6 thoughts on “crumbs/”

Bridgette says:

March 7, 2022 at 1:58 pm

Haunting

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1. Michael Raven says:
  
  March 7, 2022 at 2:02 pm
  
  Thank you. I was hoping it might have that effect.
  
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  1. chrisnelson61 says:
    
    March 8, 2022 at 3:03 am
    
    This very much made me think of lines that Ian Curtis might have written. In the end we are all alone.
    
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    1. Michael Raven says:
      
      March 8, 2022 at 5:44 am
      
      Highest praise. Thanks.
      
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Belladonna says:

March 8, 2022 at 9:28 am

Creepy!! I like it

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1. Michael Raven says:
  
  March 8, 2022 at 9:31 am
  
  Thanks!
  
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