vss365: #bare [two]

I think it is obvious that I tend to eschew end-of-line-rhyme, but this one felt like it needed it. I dunno, second-guessing myself now that it is “live”.

now that your keen
blades have left me
vivisected and
my heart laid #bare
does making me
draw my own sutures
taut seem fair?

#vss365 #micropoetry
Photo: Piotr Miazga via UnSplash

Originally tweeted by michael raven (@MichaelRaven_99) on February 16, 2022.

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