party fall/

©2021 Michael Raven

all the voices blur
shadow grey fog white
everyone at the party
says you're beautiful
everyone fades away
i'm still standing here
so you fade away
leaving me waving
in the ghost space
left behind

One thought on “party fall/

  1. ‘everyone at the party
    says you’re beautiful
    everyone fades away’
    Says it all really – the entirety of life captured in three lines. This also brings into question what we expect from life: in a way I guess that we would all like somebody to know and remember who we are, yet we are nothing more than a fleeting moment and, within a couple of generations, there will be no-one who actually knew us left at all.

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